Time for Some Serious Business

[theposhmouthytart]

I know I have a permanent HMD, but it's never been used. I'm getting back into the swing of RPing in games and in-journal lately, and to be honest, I'm feeling adrift. I've been canon reviewing like crazy, and I still feel off with Alex more times than not. So, here's a random crit request, since I know hunting down someone's HMD isn't always as easy as just clicking "reply to" on your flist.

So, I don't know anyone who doesn't feel like they aren't getting enough feedback. So... let's give some. What do you like about my pup? What do you think could be improved? What things about them do you not understand that you'd like elaborated on?

Please be as specific as possible, especially in areas you feel I am doing wrong. What parts of characters am I missing? What episodes do you feel I need to canon-review as I may be ignoring important events/developments in my characterization? Are there certain things you think I overuse or under use? Am I annoying you yet?

Especially in the case of Alex, it might be important to know she is post s1 at crowdedhour and post s2 at realityshifted. I feel like there is a very important difference there, one I may not be reflecting fairly in either game. (It also should be noted, this request for crit applies as equally to prompts and fic as it does to RP.)

Screening is enabled. Anon is activated if you don't feel comfortable posting with a journal.

x-posted to alien_catcher for her benefit, too.

Comments

hello!

[poshmouthytart.livejournal.com]

No problem! HMD stands for "How's My Driving," which is just another way of saying it's a post asking for constructive criticism.